"I am trying to check my habits of seeing, to counter them for the sake of greater freshness. I am trying to be unfamiliar with what I'm doing." - John Cage


Friday, October 5, 2012


Printed in The Meadow, 2011:
 
Buckeye Hot Springs
                                                                                                                      
Just down the creek lie the ruins
of Buckeye Sawmill. 
I curl around a sleeping dog’s back,
late sun sifting the crowns

of second growth pines along the bank.                              
How prosperous a place for a warm bath
after ripping and planking, the scent of sawdust
wafting in the summer of 1861.

Yet buckskinned men and roughened horses
couldn’t drag away the few ancient cedars
or single wall of trunk we passed today
gripping the loose ravine with knuckled roots,

fragments of old conversation high in the drainages.   
Extrapolate the forest from tree, tree.
The difference in species doesn’t matter,
in sleep. The dog and I share a primal warmth

of breath and soil. I’d like to think
this was how a garden slept
before language separated,
as our island splits the gentle murmuring stream now,

the sucking and trickling of soft absorption,
the bank a sponge, and myself,
as if spelled. Nearby a young stag is just knowing
the velvet brown of antlers

no taller than his twitching ears.
He dips a narrow hoof and steps across
just below our sleeping heads lined up like lovers,
leaving no difference in sound.

Monday, March 19, 2012

Blog as Personal Essay: Friends, Flight, and Norton

How Flight by Sherman Alexie and Joseph Epstein’s Introduction to Norton’s Book of Personal Essay shine some light on writing blogs
1. Writing for friends or strangers
Do people read blogs?  So many people want to write a blog for their business.  Or to sell a book that they haven’t written yet.  Or just to be heard.   An assumption behind writing the blog is that one has something to say that is interesting to strangers.  Gertrude Stein said that she writes for herself and for strangers.  Her writing is not easy to pick up, read, and feel like a friend.  Joseph Epstein says in his introduction to the Norton Book of Personal Essay, published in 1997, that to write an essay, one must imagine writing for potential friends.  I didn’t know I’d find so much insight into blog writing in an essay on personal essays.
I love quotes and Epstein has the good quotes.  He says that V.S. Naipaul has said “lucky is the writer who has found his or her true form.” Vaipaul, a well-written novelist, said that he won’t write any more fiction.  He considers the novel no longer “a useful form for conveying the complex truths of our day.” 
2. The blog is the new democratic essay
I just finished Flight by Sherman Alexie.  In it, Zits, the half-Indian teenager, time travels in other people’s bodies through violent wars between Native Americans and the FBI, General Custer and other armies, as well as modern day streets of Seattle, where people step over his homeless Indian body by the dumpster. Near the late middle of the book, Zits, aka an Indian boy in the late 1800’s, discovers that he doesn’t know who is good and who is not good anymore, which killing is right and which is not right.  “I am myself, and the white soldier my father wants me to kill, as well as the Indians he has killed, and his own family,” Zits thinks to himself while standing over a soldier’s body.
Flight makes its reader question how they know something to be true or to be right.  The reader questions even if it is possible to know something is true or right.  Well, I know what is right, but you do too, and we differ. Epstein mentions that at different time periods, various genres become the dominant form according to circumstances of the day.  George Lukacs, a Hungarian critic, predicts the personal essay may become the reigning form of the modern age, a time of transition, because it is the form for uncertainty and skepticism. 
But is the essay the form best suited for the time we live in?  Maybe the blog is the quick democratic video-version of the essay, a new form better suited for the information age. If the blog is in some ways a modern day personal essay, then the crucial element of an essay that Epstein outlines is relevant to how we write blogs; how do we write in a way that makes our personal experience significant as universal experience while still somehow distinguishing our individuality? 
3. Make our personal experience significant to others
Epstein suggests that discovering how our individual experience transcends into universal experience is the “magic” of the essay.  He says the essay is a form of discovery in which the writer tests their own feelings with a personal honesty, through a familiar style that creates an “amiable community” between the reader and the audience.  Not quite the definition of a blog, and yet, a description of an exceptional blog. 
A few blogs draw me into their text because I sense something that connects with and shines a light on my own experience.  Or the blog expresses an experience extraordinary, as Epstein writes of essays, in a manner that allows me to recognize that extraordinariness.  I would want this writer to become a friend because they have honestly shown me a bit of what makes them who they are, their own truth, and it shines some light on my own.

Friday, December 23, 2011

Newest workshop for 2012: I Have A First Draft: Shaping and Feedback

Did you participate in NanoWriMo?  Do you have a book project or longer writing project or short story that could use some motivating guidance? 

The writer John Cheever said "I can't write without a reader.  It's like a kiss - you can't do it alone."

A three part workshop series over three months. Develop your first draft into a refined piece through monthly feedback in a small dedicated group of writers while learning techniques for structuring and revising your book as well as tips on publishing.  $135. Call for more info!

10 - 1:30 pm
1/22,  2/5, and 3/11 

Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Truckee’s International Peace Day Celebration: Collaborative Peace Poem Project

In celebration of International Peace Day on Sept. 21st, For Goodness Sake hosted a Peace Day in the Regional Park.  At my table for Tangled Roots Writing I collected a few words about Peace from many many people.  Here is the collaborative poem that grew from those words:


 Inhale, Hold, Exhale

1.
Commune with the trees
outside the window, birds
that stare from their branches, 
the homeless man
that sleeps in a doorway.

Silence the thoughts
of dishes with your name on them,
finding a daycare provider,
all the other "ands."  

Listen to the sound of a pendulum clock.
Still water, cool and fresh,
mountain lakes, warm salty ocean, waves lapping,
crashing. Sunday afternoon
at your grandmother's house, the whisper
of golf.

Respect
tangled roots, iridescent wings,  movement
from here to now. Peace
is an unknown entity.

Rain,
a warm breeze
blows through the aspens,
snow floats on a cold winter night,
a blanket of green
encircles the earth, a piece of me.

Watch children play,
a river flow
and a garden thrive, a silent
cliffside trail, a summit
in mind.

Sit on grandmother’s porch, listen
to the rain fall.
Peace is freedom
from worry.
Begin within, pour outwards -
belong in this world.
Peace is a purple New Jersey!
Peace means happy.

2.
Learn –
the mountain looks blue today.

Explore the possibilities:
compassion
for your fellow earthling
that tailgates,
for yourself when you swear at him.

Soften,
creature of intention.

Forgive love:
wise and unconditional and blind,
the passion of dolphins, open
and hearted, full of mind.

3.
If you want peace, a piece of me,
work for justice, feed the hungry.
Love.
Play.
Listen to the call within.

Connect with the earth’s crust,
the vibrant colors of rock and tree,
around and around. No fear within,
surrounded by surprise.

Peace is not
an absence of war
but instead
an absence of strangers.

Can you hear me?

When the compassionate
heart wins over the mind
and you love what is before you,
maybe the peace in you

will help the children get along,
help the world have peace,
a harmony with hands holding each other up,
singing and serenity
throughout the whole universe.

Peace is a deep breath.

Tuesday, July 26, 2011

Newest workshop offering is for Teens preparing College Application essays

“These College Essays Are Driving Me Crazy”

Workshop for Teens


Join this fun and creative group for help developing your college application essays. Find the heart and voice of your writing.

Call for more information.

Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Collaborative Poem Project at Truckee Thursday 6/16

At the first Truckee Thursday of the summer, I set up a booth for Tangled Roots Writing and asked anyone willing to try for a few words in response to a quote by Jane Hirshfield's quote "Journey far enough into the terrain of language, it seems, and the heart will begin to speak."

So many people responded that their index cards covered my bulletin board three cards deep. Using only their words and phrases, I composed this collaborative poem - I hope you enjoy reading poetry that can only exist through the collaborative efforts of many many Truckee people.


Begin to Speak: a collaborative poem from Truckee Thursday 6/16

Heart pointed to the moon, a friend living close by –
far is far from how far?
When he began to speak
(the first word I understood)
he was emphatic;
a roughness implied, or uncertainty,
perhaps not his first word.
If you are still and can be silent you may start to hear
the words you have been longing.
Scream.
Heart will begin to speak, above ground and below,
places we aren’t familiar with but must cross through.
Lost souls, our purpose, heartreason.

On the other side of any journey
I want to be
waiting for the next step,
filled so big with so much. Every time
I hear of a trip taken far away
I enjoy my town more and more.
How far is far away?
Begin to speak
of the mind where the heart leads;
environment to lose yourself, a road trip
or a relationship. On the other side of the journey
I will be a baby. I am going to persevere
and love. Today is my day.

He rolled the word around
in his mouth, riding on it.
Get back on
into the language within us.
Write mindlessly. Eat another muscateer.
Rise from the wild,
a phoenix.
Journey well
deep and sound, under a tunnel
ride the escalator.
When he knew that I knew what he said he almost cried.